- Ice cream
In the U.S, Ice cream has been one of the main sources for type 2 diabetes in our youth today; ice cream is eaten as a snack, after dinner dessert, used as a comfort food and as an incentive or reward. - Donuts
- Contaminated food
There have been many problems with foods in the U.S getting contaminated; we have had a problem with e- coli in our lettuce, bird flu with our chicken, and mad cow disease with our beef. - Flowers
- Music
Listening to music during class time has been a huge problem at SBTA; students are failing tests, not completing their assignments, and wasting time looking for music. - Money
- School
- HIV/AIDS
- Women
Today Women in the California are more independent and successful than ever; many women work as professionals, many own their own companies, and many women hold high government positions. - cars
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THESIS STATEMENTS
There are 10 topics, you are to write thesis statements for each! I have examples provide for a few of them. Thebest way is to copy the format of my example and come up with your sentence.
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Ice Cream
In the United States, ice cream takes a big part of child obesity.
In the U.S, Ice Cream has been one of the main sources for type 2 diabetes in our youth today; Ice Cream is eaten as a snack, after dinner dessert, used as a comfort food, and as an incentive or reward.
Donuts
Donuts are commonly eaten in the morning as breakfast, or a snack, but are also fattening.
Contaminated Food
There have been many problems with foods in the U.S getting contaminated; we have had a problem with e-coli in our lettuce, bird flu with our chicken, and mad cow disease with our beef.
Flowers
flowers have been admired and used by humans along with being using as a source of food and also being given to other people on special occasions.
Music
The type of music people listen to can determine someone’s personality and how they label themselves.
Listening to music during class time has helped me to concentrate because it motivates me to focus while I’m doing class work, and makes my day go by quicker.
Money
Money makes the world go round, whether you live in poverty or are rich, you depend on money because it gets you what you need and also gets you by.
School
Going to school and getting your education is the main reason for success, success in education means more money, having a lot of education means that you are capable of getting a job in what you know best about and being able to practice the job in the best way possible.
HIV/AIDS
HIV/AIDS is one of the most deadly diseases world-wide; as of December 2000, 36.1 million people were diagnosed with HIV/AIDS, 21.8 million people have died from HIV/AIDS.
Women
Women are the main caregivers of children; when women are pregnant they become attached to the child that they are caring in their stomach, usually the men run out of the relationship so they won’t have to face the responsibility of taking care of a child, women are more mature than men their age so they are capable of taking care of a child or they find a way to but they are least likely to give up on being a parent.
Cars
Cars are one of the main sources to getting from point A to point B; cars make it quicker to go from place to place, life is much easier with cars because transportation is more accessible.
Ice cream
Ice cream is one of the longest used desserts in its time world wide. A variety of flavors, and structures of ice cream have been made over time. You can add your own topping, use different types of cones, and mix flavors. Ice cream is very fun to create, and it is a very tasty treat for a hot day.
Donuts
Donuts have been around for many years, they are used for morning breakfast's, and can be unhealthy for you. They are very tasty, but at the same time, they do not contain any of the nutrition that you should be consuming as a morning snack.
Contaminated food
Studies show that new released foods have to go through a process of making sure that it is not hazardous to anyone willing to eat it. There have been many situations where, food has been contaminated due to the chemicals being put into food.
Flowers
Flowers have been a huge problem with society, because of the pollen, many people have allergies to it. Although they are beautiful, they can not be any closer than twenty feet to an allergenic person towards pollen.
Music
Music helps many young people in our days to concentrate more on their work. If you haven’t noticed, they can get their work done faster because the rhythm of the beats get them thinking clearer, and the music blocks out any noises that can distract the youth from its work.
Money
Money is the top most wanted source from everyone in the world. The world is always going to turn, but money is what also makes the world go around. Not everyone is capable of making as much money as they want, and some people are luckier than others.
School
School is the only thing that you can regret in life, if you never attended. Anyone can take anything from you, but no one can ever take away your education. As a toddler you are taught things that get you to prepare yourself for college. School will be handed to you for about the first 20 years of your life.
HIV/AIDS
HIV and AIDS have become a problem to many people in the world. Sex is no longer taken seriously. Intimacy is no longer keeping its own word. HIV and AIDS have taken control of peoples lives because they no longer protect themselves in bed.
Women
Women have taken big steps in life lately. Long before women had rights to do anything, they were stuck at home being mothers. Now, today, women are probing themselves that they are just as good as anyone else doing a job. Women are taken jobs at presidents and managers of keeping a company together.
Cars
Cars are the greatest sets of transportations today. In America, ford was the biggest expansion of cars. Each car was made exactly the same as the others, color was no difference either. Today, cars have changed a lot since then , you can get them in different types of brands and colors. You can even customize your own.
Ice Cream
In the United States, ice cream takes a big part of child obesity.
In the U.S, Ice Cream has been one of the main sources for type 2 diabetes in our youth today; Ice Cream is eaten as a snack, after dinner dessert, used as a comfort food, and as an incentive or reward.
Donuts
Donuts are commonly eaten as a snack; it isn’t considered breakfast, it doesn’t provide the daily nutrients that you need, nutritionists don’t consider it healthy.
Contaminated Food
There have been many problems with foods in the U.S getting contaminated; we have had a problem with e-coli in our lettuce, bird flu with our chicken, and mad cow disease with our beef.
Flowers
Flowers are used in traditional occasions; they can be given from one person to another on a special occasion, they can be used at weddings, and also be used for forgiveness.
Music
Listening to music during class time has helped me to concentrate because it motivates me to focus while I’m doing class work, and makes my day go by quicker.
Money
Money makes the world go round; people depend on it to get needs and wants, they survive on the amount of money they have, most people are money fiends .
School
Going to school and getting your education is the main reason for success, success in education means more money, having a lot of education means that you are capable of getting a job in what you know best about and being able to practice the job in the best way possible.
HIV/AIDS
HIV/AIDS is one of the most deadly diseases world-wide; as of December 2000, 36.1 million people were diagnosed with HIV/AIDS, 21.8 million people have died from HIV/AIDS.
Women
Majority of women are the main caregivers of children; they put their children before themselves, they normally raise their children alone, mothers will always be there.
Cars
Cars are one of the main sources to getting from point A to point B; cars make it quicker to go from place to place, life is much easier with cars because transportation is more accessible.
1. six flags: Due to the fact that Six Flags is the only theme park, I feel is worth visiting, therefore I disagree with the owner’s decision of closing it down.
2. donuts: As a result of eating too many donuts, there are high possibilities that you might become obess or face health related problems.
3. new school hours: There has really been no change for the new class schedule , except for the fact that we are now waking up earlier, but still have school for the same amount of time as before.
4. getting tested: Visiting a clinic to get tested is the best result of knowing if your body is healthy , this may help to stay safe, & an early prevention of either pregnancy or health issues as sexually transmitted infections or diseases.
5. pollution/ Recycling: Recycling many things is a great way to prevent polluted air, reuse useful resources, things will be inexpensive, & increases health for humans & the earth.
i made my own cause yours were not so intersting for me to write about
Making your own thesis statement
1. Ice cream- In the United States, ice cream is widely used for many different desserts; these include the famous banana split, the ice cream filled cake, and ice cream sandwiches.
2. Donuts- Cops have been profiled as the main consumers of donuts; this is due to movies about cops, television shows, and sightings.
3. Contaminated foods- There are many contaminated foods in the U.S.; they include the recent contaminated spinach, the lettuce outbreak, and the bird flu in chicken.
4. Flowers- There is many famous native flowers in the U.S.; roses, violets, and daisies are the common ones in this group.
5. Music-Listening to music during class has been a huge problem at SBTA; students are failing tests, not completing their assignments, and wasting time looking for music.
6. Money- Money is a solution to day to day problems; it helps with purchasing various items, taking trips to different places, and luxury items.
7. School- Most schools in the San Diego are enforcing the Zero Tolerance rule for safety; it will lower crime rate, drug use at school, and gang activity.
8. HIV/AIDS- In the 1980s, HIV/AIDS became a widely spread epidemic.
9. Women- Every day, women are victim of a crime; this includes sexual harassment, physical abuse, and verbal abuse.
10. Cars- There is a big demand in America on old school cars; the most wanted is older Chevrolet Impala’s, Monte Carlo’s, and El Camino’s.
1. Ice cream
In the U.S, Ice cream has been one of the main reasons for obesity in our youth today; ice cream is eaten as a snack, after dinner dessert, used as a comfort food and as an incentive or reward.
2. Donuts
Donuts are known to have been the second reason for type two diabetes in our youth today; donuts are eaten as a snack, after dinner donuts are eaten as dessert, and donuts are used as a reward.
3. Contaminated food
There have been many problems with foods in the U.S getting contaminated; we have had a problem with e coli in our lettuce, bird flu with our chicken, and mad cow disease with our beef.
4. Flowers
Flowers are popular gifts for women; women are always given bouquets of flowers when they receive an award, women are given flowers for special holidays, and women are given flowers on birthdays.
5. Music
Listening to music during class time has been beneficial to students at South Bay Technology Academy; students are able to concentrate better on assignments, it calms students down, and it motivates students to complete class work.
6. Money
Money has become a life and death situation; people die every minute because dough boys don’t have their money, people sell their body for money to survive, and children start slanging drugs at a very young age to help support their families.
7. School
Schools have become far more essential than ever before; to obtain almost any career one needs to go to college, school helps with marketing, and it helps develop and improve social skills.
8. HIV/AIDS
HIV/AIDS has spread dramatically throughout the United States; people with HIV/AIDS has increased recently, the reason why it continues to spread is because most people don’t even know they have the disease, and finally, because the few people that are aware of having HIV/AIDS don’t tell their partners and spread it more.
9. Women
Today Women in the United States are more independent and successful than ever; women are allowed to vote, women are allowed to work in almost any position, and many women hold high government positions.
10. Cars
The movie, Cars, was one of the cutest Pixar movies I’ve ever seen, the graphics were great, the actors chosen for the voices fit the characters exactly, and it kept me laughing throughout the entire movie.
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Schools have become far more essential than ever before; it helps with career, networking, and developing social skills.
Ice cream In the U.S, Ice cream has been one of the main sources for type 2 diabetes in our youth today; ice cream is eaten as a snack, after dinner dessert, used as a comfort food and as an incentive or reward.
Donuts
Donuts are very popular in the whole world, with all the different flavors and variety; theirs round ones and rectangular ones and even donut holes.
Contaminated food There have been many problems with foods in the U.S getting contaminated; we have had a problem with e- coli in our lettuce, bird flu with our chicken, and mad cow disease with our beef.
Flowers
Flowers can be used for many different occasions ; theirs weddings, funerals, and even Quinceñeras.
Music Listening to music during class time has been a huge problem at SBTA; students are failing tests, not completing their assignments, and wasting time looking for music.
Money
The world revolves around money, we need it for practically everything ;from buying clothes, food, and even paying rent or buying a house.
School
People go to school for different reasons; either for an education, a career or just because there parents make them.
HIV/AIDS
HIV/AIDS can be prevented by different ways ;theirs condoms, sexual history, or just being abstinent.
Women Today Women in the California are more independent and successful than ever; many women work as professionals, many own their own companies, and many women hold high government positions.
Cars
Cars are a necessity to get around in San Diego; because the bus takes to long, walking is tiring, and most things are hard to get to other ways.
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1. six flags: Due to the fact that Six Flags is the only theme park, I feel is worth visiting, therefore I disagree with the owner’s decision of closing it down.
2. donuts: As a result of eating too many donuts, there are high possibilities that you might become obess or face health related problems.
3. new school hours: Personally, I believe the new class schedule has not produced any positive changes, we are now waking up earlier, but still have school for the same amount of hours.
4. getting tested: Visiting a clinic every six months is the best way to maintain our body in a healthy condition, it helps stay safe with protection, & an early prevention of either pregnancy or sexually transmitted infections or diseases.
5. pollution/ Recycling: Recycling is great for the environment, it produces great benefits as reusing resources, promote clean air, & is healthier for community and earth.
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ice cream is not such a big problem if you know how to control you sweet tooth;
Reason : control your cravings
Reason: eat it every once in a while as a treat
Reason: just eat it as a dessert
Ice Cream is not a problem if you know how to control your sweet tooth; learn control of cravings, eating it sparingly, or eating it just for dessert.
More people should donate blood
Reason: people should be considerate an donate blood because it can help save more lives
Reason: its also a very generous thing to do
Reason: its positive. More people should donate blood, it saves lives, it is generous, and it positive.
People should be fined or either thrown in jail for driving while talking on a cell phone;
Reason: it causes a big distraction;
Reason: You can run some one over if your not paying attention
Reason: It can causes many deaths
People should be thrown in jail or for driving while taking on the phone; it causes a big distraction towards the driver, you can possibly run some one over, or even kill some innocent person.
More men and women should donate some of there hair for the kids with leukemia and cancer
Reason: it shows generosity
Reason: it can put a smile on a child's face
reason: help build up there self esteems
More men and women should donate some of there hair to for kids with leukemia because it shows a great deal of generosity that hair can be made in to a wig a and put a smile on a kids face and the hair can also build up there self esteem.
There should be more security and respect in these united states for Americas women
Reason: there are thousands of women that get raped every day
Reason: they should ban all chat lines and pornographic web sites
Reason celebrity's should not be aloud to discriminate women in there music videos
there should be more respect and security in these united states for women because there are there are thousands of women that get raped everyday, all chat lines and porno0graphic websites should be banned because that is on cause of rape, as well as music videos discriminating Americas women.
ice cream is not such a big problem if you know how to control you sweet tooth;
Reason : control your cravings
Reason: eat it every once in a while as a treat
Reason: just eat it as a dessert
Ice Cream is not a problem if you know how to control your sweet tooth; learn control of cravings, eating it sparingly, or eating it just for dessert.
More people should donate blood
Reason: people should be considerate an donate blood because it can help save more lives
Reason: its also a very generous thing to do
Reason: its positive. More people should donate blood, it saves lives, it is generous, and it positive.
People should be fined or either thrown in jail for driving while talking on a cell phone;
Reason: it causes a big distraction;
Reason: You can run some one over if your not paying attention
Reason: It can causes many deaths
People should be thrown in jail or for driving while taking on the phone; it causes a big distraction towards the driver, you can possibly run some one over, or even kill some innocent person.
More men and women should donate some of there hair for the kids with leukemia and cancer
Reason: it shows generosity
Reason: it can put a smile on a child's face
reason: help build up there self esteems
More men and women should donate some of there hair to for kids with leukemia because it shows a great deal of generosity that hair can be made in to a wig a and put a smile on a kids face and the hair can also build up there self esteem.
There should be more security and respect in these united states for Americas women
Reason: there are thousands of women that get raped every day
Reason: they should ban all chat lines and pornographic web sites
Reason celebrity's should not be aloud to discriminate women in there music videos
there should be more respect and security in these united states for women because there are there are thousands of women that get raped everyday, all chat lines and porno0graphic websites should be banned because that is on cause of rape, as well as music videos discriminating Americas women.
Ice cream
1. There are many choices to eat your ice cream with; you can eat them with a banana, you can eat it with cookie dough and you can put syrup in it.
Donuts
2. Donuts are the most common snack they are sold everywhere; there are donut shops, they are sold in airports and they are present the most common snack present in meetings.
Contaminated food
3. There are many causes for contaminated food; bacteria, parasites and viruses are three of the main causes of this problem.
Flowers
4. Flowers are the most common objects to show emotions in many occasions; flowers are given on valentines day, they are musts at weddings and they are given as gifts on anniversaries.
Music
5. IN today's world teenagers are mostly influenced by music; music videos influence about teenagers on how to dance, they influence the way they dress and music makes a great impact on the vocabulary teens use.
Money
6. Money is what you need to survive in the world; you need money to buy food, to buy a house, to get transportation and to have a shelter.
School
7. In the U.S school is a great choice for students; they get to interact with different people and make friends, it keeps some students out of trouble and it guides them thru their future.
HIV/AIDS
8. Africa is the biggest population with people infected with HIV; 60 percent of Southern Africa are living with HIV, 3.2 million people in the Southern region alone became infected, 3.4 children and adults die because of aids.
Women
9. In today’s world women are successful; they are millionaires, they are running for president and they own their own businesses.
Cars
10. BMW’s are the best cars; they are luxury vehicles, they have good motors and they are imported vehicles.
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